Negotiation Scripts for South African Candidates: Ask for More Pay, Medical Aid or Relocation Support

Preparing to negotiate an offer in South Africa requires research, tact and a clear understanding of total rewards (salary, benefits, tax and conditions). Below are practical, ready-to-use negotiation scripts, expert tips and a decision checklist to help you ask confidently for more pay, medical aid cover or relocation support — while protecting your relationship with the recruiter or hiring manager.

Why negotiation matters (South African context)

Quick negotiation checklist (before you call or email)

Scripts to ask for more base pay

Phone / Video script (concise, professional)

"Thank you again for the offer — I'm excited about the role. Based on market benchmarks and my experience in [skill/industry], I'm looking for a salary of R[desired amount] to reflect the scope and responsibilities. Is there flexibility to move from R[current offer] to R[desired amount], or could we explore an earlier review and performance-linked increase?"

Key points:

  • State excitement first.
  • Provide a clear number or small range.
  • Offer alternatives (earlier review) to keep negotiations constructive.

Email script (formal)

Subject: Offer Discussion — [Your Name]

Dear [Hiring Manager Name],

Thank you for the offer and for the confidence you've expressed in me. I'm very keen to join [Company]. After reviewing the full package and market data for similar roles, I was hoping we could discuss the base salary. Given my experience in [X], and the responsibilities outlined, would you consider R[desired amount] (or a midpoint range of R[X–Y])?

If a higher base isn't possible, I'm open to discussing an earlier performance review at 6 months and a performance-linked bonus structure.

Thank you for considering — I'm confident we can reach an agreement that reflects the value I'll bring.

Kind regards,
[Your Name]

Scripts to request medical aid coverage or improvements

Medical aid is often negotiable — especially if the employer currently offers partial cover or a company scheme you can join. Highlight cost implications and family coverage if relevant.

Phone / In-person script

"I noticed the offer includes a contribution of X% to medical aid. Given my family's needs (or the scheme options), would the company consider increasing the employer contribution to cover [principal member + 1] or offering a subsidy to join the group scheme? Alternatively, would you consider a medical aid allowance of R[amount] per month?"

Email script

Subject: Medical Aid Component — Offer Discussion

Dear [Hiring Manager],

Thank you again for the offer. One area I'd like to discuss is the medical aid contribution. The current offer indicates [employer contribution level]. Given the cost differences between private schemes and family needs, would the company consider increasing the employer contribution to [X] or providing a monthly medical allowance of R[amount]?

I'm open to options that would make the total package workable for both sides.

Best,
[Your Name]

Reference: Learn how medical aid and retirement components typically affect offers here: Understanding UIF, Pension/Provident Funds and Medical Aid in SA Job Offers.

Scripts to request relocation support

Relocation requests should be specific: moving costs, temporary accommodation, travel, work permits (if applicable) and reimbursement policies.

Phone / Video script

"Moving from [city] will incur costs including movers, travel and temporary housing. Could the company provide a relocation allowance of R[amount] or organize and cover standard moving expenses? If a lump sum isn't possible, could we agree on reimbursement for invoices up to R[amount]?"

Email script (detailed)

Subject: Relocation Support — [Your Name]

Dear [Hiring Manager],

I’m excited to accept the role but will require relocation from [location]. Could we discuss relocation support? Typical needs include:
- Movers and transport of household goods
- Up to X weeks of temporary accommodation
- Travel for house-hunting

Would you consider either a relocation allowance of R[amount] or reimbursement of relocation invoices up to R[amount]? I'm happy to provide estimates and receipts.

Thanks for considering,
[Your Name]

Note: Check tax implications and company relocation policies; some allowances may be taxable. For specifics, see: How to Evaluate a South African Job Offer: Total Rewards, Tax (SARS) and Benefits Explained.

Alternatives & trade-offs: compare options

Negotiation Item Pros Cons Typical South African considerations
Higher base salary Recurring benefit to all future earnings Harder to secure if budget fixed Affects UIF/pension contributions and tax
Sign-on / Relocation allowance One-off cost, easier for employer Not recurring Often taxed; get receipts and clarify policy
Increased medical aid contribution Improves family coverage & lowers out-of-pocket Costly for employer May be easier in larger employers with schemes
Earlier review / performance-based increase Lowers upfront cost for employer Dependent on performance Agree on KPIs and review date in writing
Scarce-skills premium Recognises market value Must justify with data See tactics: Negotiating Scarce Skills Premiums in South Africa

Closing the negotiation professionally

Final tips from an expert

  • Be data-driven: use salary benchmarks and evidence to justify requests.
  • Be flexible: offer alternatives (sign-on, earlier review, adjusted benefits).
  • Maintain rapport: negotiation should be collaborative, not adversarial.
  • Document everything: get any change to the offer in writing before resigning your current role.

For deeper prep on benchmarking and calculating net impact, start with: Interview Preparation South Africa: How to Research Salary Benchmarks Before Your Interview and Cost-of-Living and Net Pay: Calculate Your Take-Home Salary in South Africa (SARS Considerations).

Use the scripts above, tailor the numbers and evidence to your situation, and negotiate confidently.